The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful attitude, we all need the reminder. Thanks.
01/10/08
I loved this story. You've woven humor, tenderness, and outrageousness with good, descriptive language. Great imagination.
01/11/08
Lovely, witty writing in a very readable voice.

Work a bit on formatting--that extra space between paragraphs makes your piece more visually appealing. And I'd hate for anyone to bypass this delightful story!
Hey!

That was enjoyable. It seemed very poetic and would have read faster and easier with more speraton in the paragraphs.

You have a great gift in writing expression.
01/18/08
Congratulations, Melanie, on placing 15th in level 2 with this entry. Great job!
03/20/08
Sounds like a Saturday morning in the home I grew up in! This is a delightful "Brunch Time!"
I love this line: “I can make you toast”, my four year old girl said as she smoothed the hair back from my face. In that moment, my heart told me what a good mother she would make some day.