The Official Writing Challenge
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What a passionate, beautiful, rich description of love between a husband and wife. The images evoked are powerful. Truly excellent work.
Well Done!
True love is born of a force larger than ourselves and loves beyond the abilities of those it encompasses! How well this poem illustrates that truth! Excellent work! Blessings, Cheri
Love your word usage. Also love the message that love is threatened by many enemies, yet if the relationship is designed by God it remains and stays strong. Really lovely imagery throughout.
This piece brought tears to my eyes. It blessed me so much. Beautiful writing. Thank you for commenting on my piece, A Precious Jewel.