The Official Writing Challenge
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We certainly do see airing of dirty laundry more often than we would like. And you are right: we can only clean up our act, one act at a time.
12/16/07
You've presented some interesting thoughts here. And, you're right -- when Christ returns, it won't be like a dove. He's coming as a Conquering King and there will be no doubt who He is! Christmas blessings! :)
12/17/07
I like the A-B-B-A rhyme scheme--it's one not often used.

Maybe some minor adjustments to the meter, for flow?

Good last line!
12/18/07
Poetry in a week requires genuine inspiration and yours works, but seems a little forced. Almost missed the rhyme scheme because the meter tripped me up a little. You have the right idea, though, and a good last line. Keep at it.