The Official Writing Challenge
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Great pastor! Loved his POV!
Keep at it.
Your descriptions of the basketball game are excellent. I was there, holding my breath, sure he'd make the last free throw. The analogy to the church is perfect. Well done! :) Cat
I feel like Tony the Tiger: G-R-R-R-R-E-A-T!!! I loved this! The dialog was very well done. Great analogy and you were able to tie it all together within the 750-word limit. Good work! Christmas blessings! :)
This entry is on target topic-wise, message-wise and smarts-wise. The pastor has a good's teamWork that counts. A creative and well written piece. Nice job.
Very good--it never, ever would have occurred to me to use a basketball analogy for the church--this is unique and extremely creative.
Wanted him to make the shot, but so glad, in the end, that he missed. Plan on forwarding this to our school's BB coach.
Congratulations, James, on placing 8th in your level. Great work.