The Official Writing Challenge
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Great pastor! Loved his POV!
Keep at it.
12/16/07
Your descriptions of the basketball game are excellent. I was there, holding my breath, sure he'd make the last free throw. The analogy to the church is perfect. Well done! :) Cat
12/16/07
I feel like Tony the Tiger: G-R-R-R-R-E-A-T!!! I loved this! The dialog was very well done. Great analogy and you were able to tie it all together within the 750-word limit. Good work! Christmas blessings! :)
12/16/07
This entry is on target topic-wise, message-wise and smarts-wise. The pastor has a good point...it's teamWork that counts. A creative and well written piece. Nice job.
12/17/07
Very good--it never, ever would have occurred to me to use a basketball analogy for the church--this is unique and extremely creative.
12/18/07
Wanted him to make the shot, but so glad, in the end, that he missed. Plan on forwarding this to our school's BB coach.
12/21/07
Congratulations, James, on placing 8th in your level. Great work.