The Official Writing Challenge
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12/16/07
More more!! I SO want to know where he was - the details of his odd walk through this strange place were very tantalizing. I was blessed by this - especially the anonymous person who gave him the blanket. Keep writing!
12/16/07
Wow -- there's some depth here and much to consider. I had to keep reading as your descriptive words continued to draw me in. You did a wonderful job of showing the stark contrast between the unbeliever and the true church--no fellowship between light and darkness. Beautifully written. Christmas blessings! :)
12/18/07
Really liked the mystery of the first part, and agree that you might have simply used a few too many words. It's so hard to know when to stop sometimes...
12/21/07
Congratulations, Suzanne, on placing 11th in your level. Great work!