The Official Writing Challenge
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12/16/07
Very, VERY creative! I really, really liked this. Great images, natural rhyme, wonderful rhythm. That last stanza takes the cake, too. I truly enjoyed this.
12/16/07
Very creative -- a good and easy read with a natural feel to the meter. Great work! Christmas blessings! :)
12/16/07
The 3rd stanza made me laugh out loud--wonderful, wonderful poem. Fantastic entry!
12/18/07
Yes! Yes! And the pretties of the body exist simultaneously with the sickies. I saw a couple of levels here, and good strong structure besides. Sell this, won't you?
12/21/07
Congratulations, Sara, on placing sixth in your level. Great work!