The Official Writing Challenge
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12/16/07
A very convicting message. Thank you for sharing it.
12/16/07
Good job. As I read this, I'm reminded of Carman's "The Champion" where he captured the wrestling between flesh and spirit, righteousness and evil. Very powerful piece--may God awaken ALL our slumbering hearts. God bless! :)
12/16/07
Great entry--I almost think it'd be even stronger if you just started with the 4th paragraph--that's where the "oomph" is.

I wasn't clear on what you meant by "derange its God-given nature". A little clarification needed there, perhaps?

Powerful writing!
12/18/07
Still not quite sure whether this is a sermon or a story...are you? The story part tells the point of the sermon, though, doesn't it? I'm sobered, too. Your sin list is enough to convict anyone.