The Official Writing Challenge
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12/16/07
What a neat testimony. I truly enjoyed this read. A bit of polish (work on grammar and such) would make this even better. I love the title too - and how you tied it all together in the end.
12/16/07
Oh, how awesome is our precious Lord and His sweet Holy Spirit who draws us to Him so gently and so personally. I'm near tears--how I love a good testimony of God's power to save. I can just picture that Chapel on the Hill and feel the presence of the Lord. Thank you SO much for sharing! Christmas blessings! :)

PS - my husband was in the Navy about the same time as you, serving off the cost of Viet Nam on USS Princeton.
12/16/07
I LOVED reading this testimony--full of equal parts of grace and nostalgia.

The beginning part of it was nicely paragraphed, but somehow the central section was not. An easy fix...

I hope you share this with lots and lots of people.
12/16/07
What a wonderful testimony, and you described it so well. Just a few typo's that one more proofread can catch. Very good writing. God Bless.
12/18/07
Thank you for this lovely picture. It really got off the ground when you began describing what happened on that special day. Still so fresh...bless you for retaining the fire!