The Official Writing Challenge
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What a neat testimony. I truly enjoyed this read. A bit of polish (work on grammar and such) would make this even better. I love the title too - and how you tied it all together in the end.
Oh, how awesome is our precious Lord and His sweet Holy Spirit who draws us to Him so gently and so personally. I'm near tears--how I love a good testimony of God's power to save. I can just picture that Chapel on the Hill and feel the presence of the Lord. Thank you SO much for sharing! Christmas blessings! :)

PS - my husband was in the Navy about the same time as you, serving off the cost of Viet Nam on USS Princeton.
I LOVED reading this testimony--full of equal parts of grace and nostalgia.

The beginning part of it was nicely paragraphed, but somehow the central section was not. An easy fix...

I hope you share this with lots and lots of people.
What a wonderful testimony, and you described it so well. Just a few typo's that one more proofread can catch. Very good writing. God Bless.
Thank you for this lovely picture. It really got off the ground when you began describing what happened on that special day. Still so fresh...bless you for retaining the fire!