The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
Your 3rd paragraph is awesome, as is the phrase "busies your tongue".

It's a good idea to avoid defiitions--it's a device used very frequently, and is usually not necessary. Use your own compelling writing to show the meanings of the words in context, or if the words are familiar, they needn't be defined at all.

Great title, and creative to use homelessness for this week. On topic? Maybe not...but well-written.
12/08/07
I enjoyed this read - I can definitely feel your passion for this topic. Keep writing!
12/09/07
Creative twist on the topic. An entertaining read with a good message. God bless.
12/09/07
Wow, what a good message you presented in your essay. Great!
12/09/07
This piece convicted me and reminded me of who Jesus spoke of often, and what our actions ought to be toward these people. I agree with Jan about the third paragraph- fantastic writing, intelligent and insightful. Great job.