The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
Oh, my!

I felt as if I were being introduced to a wonderful group of brothers and sisters. And the ending had me reeling.

I wonder...what about shortening up some of the introductory material, and telling more of the story that closes your entry? It's a wonderful illustration of God's grace.
12/08/07
I truly feel like I have gotten to know each of these people. This is lovely.