The Official Writing Challenge
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Great dialogue,"send your wife"...lol...realistic people,

so...who was at the door? (to be continued !)
Suspence...so who was at the door?
12/08/07
Very realistic dialog - and a wonderful retelling of the perfect Bible story for this topic. (I know who's at the door!) ;) Keep writing!
12/09/07
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! Freshness. Great job. A pleasure to read. And the ending, masterful. Oh yes, SUPERB title. God bless.
12/09/07
I loved this take on what was going on behind the scene. Great dialogue and humor! I loved it.
12/10/07
yeah, this is good; I loved the ending.
12/14/07
Congratulations, Clyde, on placing 8th in your level :)