The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
How wonderful--I've read of many similar divine interventions, and it's always inspiring.

Your "home group" was hovering in the background the whole time, behind the scenes--could make this a little bit "iffy" on topic, though. It will assist your readers if you add an extra white space between paragraphs.

Lots of great action and suspense here.

12/08/07
What an amazing testimony. I was definitely engaged. Great details.
12/11/07
Great and riveting writing. I also applaud you for challenging us to think of those Christians who meet in small groups in eastern countries that especially need our support and prayers. Blessings!
12/14/07
Congratulations, Tom, on placing 12th in your level.