The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/07
Home groups are supposed to be a haven, aren't they? Your submission shows so well, rather than tells. It doesn't explain how I should feel, but makes me feel that way anyway. Thank you.
This is heart-wrenching!!
12/08/07
Wonderful descriptions - this is just beautifully and poignantly done. Excellent.
12/14/07
I LOVE this. Your heartfelt writing is a pleasure to read, and the story told is excellent. Congrats on a well deserved Highly Commended. :) Love, Cat
05/08/08
Beautiful and well told! The images are fresh and realistic for this man and his setting.