The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/07
Some great descriptive phrases here in this tense and merciful story of the gift of healing.

I'd have liked a bit more context to help me figure out the time and place of this story; I was constantly revising in my head. Also, there were a few POV switches from Rosa to Angela.

The best thing about this entry is its mood, very effectively conveyed though excellent word choices.
My heart is still pounding! I feel the tension.

The story is somewhat hard to follow, but the intense writing drew me in.

Keep writing!