The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/07
How sad, and very tenderly written.

Consider polishing up the meter of this a bit; it'll improve the flow for your readers. As it is, we trip up a bit when the rhythm becomes irregular.

You're right--friendship is a marvelous gift. Reading your poem helps us to remember to be thankful for the friends we have.

12/03/07
This is another story that gives me goosebumps. The last line is especially poignant. Beautiful and wonderful writing!