The Official Writing Challenge
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How sad, and very tenderly written.

Consider polishing up the meter of this a bit; it'll improve the flow for your readers. As it is, we trip up a bit when the rhythm becomes irregular.

You're right--friendship is a marvelous gift. Reading your poem helps us to remember to be thankful for the friends we have.

This is another story that gives me goosebumps. The last line is especially poignant. Beautiful and wonderful writing!