The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/07
Heartbreaking!

I had to read this a few times, and I'm still a little bit confused; is the disabled boy the same one who died? And I'm not sure about the last sentence at all--was there a stepmother and a birth mother? Maybe a few more proper names would have smoothed out the confusion.

The woman who cried with the grieving mother gave a wonderful gift, that's for sure.