The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/07
Nice piece of writing.
I love the "Did I say I loved....refrain" :)
11/24/07
Your descriptions are lovely and meaningful and poignant. This is wonderful.
11/26/07
Very nice. I like how you followed the MC into adulthood and the son is now helping grandma. Great descriptions. Very engaging!
Laury
11/28/07
I really enjoy your conversational tone and your pleasant writing style.
Your story touched my heart and I also loved how you repeated "Did I say that I love...?" Well done!