The Official Writing Challenge
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11/22/07
Very unique story. Great going.
Very creative writing with an important message.
11/24/07
Great point, poignantly expressed. Much to think about.
I enjoyed this unique reminder of how things are not always as they seem.
You might wish to note that there are two places where you used "then", where "than" would be the correct wordd usage.