The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
Wowsers, this is an excellent poem! Superb use of imagery and alliteration, and the ebb and flow of the words evokes the waves...

Is it perhaps weak on topic? Maybe, but it's an excellent, excellent poem nevertheless.
11/22/07
On the contrary ... I thought my piece was very much on topic. The "believers" were the disciples. And, sometimes "encouragement" cries out in self-preservation. Thank you for your positive words.