Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  



The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge

BACK TO
CHALLENGE
MAIN

INSTRUCTIONS

how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level

ENTRIES

submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners



Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST



Share
how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Encouragement (among believers) (11/08/07)

TITLE: The Fourth Man
By c clemons
11/14/07


 LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 ADD TO MY FAVORITES

No matter what you do
Heís there to take you thru
You are never alone
He knows your zone

If you start to fear
Replace it with a cheer
All Praise be to our God
On Satanís head we will trod


In the midst of your trouble
See your problems turned to rubble
Closer than a brother He will stick
He already knows all of Satanís tricks

Remind yourself like in Danielís time,
Three were accused of a state crime
Tossed in a furnace, they gave Him praise
A fourth man was seen among the blaze

That fourth man still lives to day
Encouraging and helping us along the way
Never late, all for His goodness sake
He knows itís my soul that is at stake

This may have been a too simple rhyme
For those who look for meter and time
But itís good to know and learn from best
He inspires and prepares you for the test.


The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be right now. CLICK HERE

JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.


This article has been read 514 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Jan Ackerson 11/15/07
Love the cheer!

Be careful of metric inconsistencies and forced rhymes.

I like the title, very much.
Marita Vandertogt11/18/07
Good reminder of His constant presence with us.
Debbie Wistrom11/19/07
I like the tie in to the title!