The Official Writing Challenge
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Good testimony. Story read well and with speed; not too much information, just enough to get the point. Punctuation a little off; a lot like my spelling.

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01/25/05
40 + years AMEN ! I loved this tale I identified with more than one exsperiance .I would have loved 62 years of marriage like my grandparents but it seems that God has other plans .Thanks for sharing your heart !
01/28/05
This was a very poignant and touching story. I'm so glad that God answered the desire of your heart at a time when all you could do was cry out to Him. I think that you have a very winsome way of writing and polishing up the punctuation and usage would add readability.
Wow, what a testimony! God bless you.