The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, how cute! It had me giggling all the way through. Good poem!
It is now 1:40 in the afternoon and it's been an irritating day so far. Then I read your article and it made me smile. The images that came to mind were wonderful and very sweet. Nice take on the subject. Well done.
The first three stanzas somehow had me thinking you were going to describe a special angel sent from the Lord. The line that melted me was "Faithful comes from Heaven; He's near when lonely calls." Then I found out you really were writing about cupid. I felt a little let down. But the ending was cute once my thinking got reorientated.