The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
A beautiful story of friendship. Good work.
11/16/07
This is inspiring and precious.

You might want to work a bit on dialogue--sometimes it sounded not quite natural, and some of the dialogue punctuation needs editing.

You really nailed the topic with a sweet example of Christian encouragement.
This is an enjoyable story of Christian friendship. I liked that the encouragement came from the lady with the loss of vision instead of the other way around. Keep writing. This is good.