The Official Writing Challenge
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The story of the singing family is quite charming.

This piece is well-written, but maybe just a bit weak on the topic of evangelism.

I'd love to read the singing family bit written as a story, with dialogue between you and your husband, for example. It's so sweet!
Nice images, I was with you, listening to thier joy. I think there is more to be said about this story, keep at it.
Great story! I disagree with the first comment, it was not weak at all about the subject, what better to share the gospel than to live it? Keep writing and keep up the good work!!
*correction* What better WAY to show the gospel..
Yes, singing is a sign of inner joy. When the heart is not in tune with God, it loses its song.