The Official Writing Challenge
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This was SO well thought-out in structure and was very passionate and deep. I had to read it three times to capture its depth and true meaning! Not sure I acutally have caught it all yet. Extremely thought-provoking.
Wow! Thought-provoking, inspiring, and convicting in its message. This piece is very good. You have captured a message that we all need to hear. Blessings~
Wow! This is SO good. Loved it! Everything about it! Wow again!
Great structure--the progression through the verses is super, and the meter and set-up of the whole poem is awesome!
This is a great poem with a great message. I like the movement from the distressed and their pain to the call to look away from self to the Master. He is the only one who can heal the pain.
Very well written and striking.