The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/07
You have put my feelings about evangelism into your poem. I too hope rather than preach to others (and scare them away) I prefer that the way I live will be a reflection of what it means to be a follower of Jesus and so win others to Him. That is the message - a good one - that I read in your poem.
11/14/07
This is perfect! Anointed.
11/14/07
You have a great message about evangelism in this poem. I think other's watching God meet our needs is a very powerful way to draw them to the Lord, especially when we deal with one of life's hard blows by depending on Him. Good writing!
11/14/07
I love the tender spirit you've revealed here.

From a poetic standpoint, the numerals in parentheses are a teensy bit distracting. I'd recommend leaving them off, then just adding a note that says something like "Scriptural references are as follows:" then listing them. Much more aesthetically pleasing that way.

I'm very much like you as far as spiritual "style." Thanks for this poem!