The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/05
Poignant! Well done
Pat Guy  
05/23/05
Very, Very GOOD! Enjoyed reading this!
05/23/05
I really enjoyed the way you went back and forth from Michael to Jessica through the years of their lives. It was very effective. God always has a plan and always answers prayer.
05/26/05
I liked your style of writing, the way you intertwined the separate and independent lives of both characters. It was dramatic and effective.

My favorite line is:
"He avoids God as his battalion travels to Africa, hardens his heart in eastern Europe and denies the Spirit's urgings in the Persian Gulf". No matter where you go, you can't escape the calling of the Lord. You showed the benefits of someone who finally yields to the call. And what a reward: a God-ordained soulmate. Nicely done.
09/20/07
Wonderful romance. God knows what he's doing.