The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/05
I didn't know that guys felt that way, too. I empathized with your feelings because I was lonely and left out when I was growing up! I am so glad that you found the only true love...the love of our Lord and Savior.
How wonderful for you! I enjoyed reading about your love for your child and your wife and how you saw the Lord in that love. This was a special piece and you spoke from your heart. Your sensitivity shone through. Nicely done. I read it with interest.
05/24/05
A good potrayal of the pain of rejection. How often adults think children will get over the knockbacks of their school days. Not so. It's sad that we sometimes become cynics, like the crowd behind the gym, when we no longer want to place ourselves at risk of more rejection.
05/25/05
Great story on, no matter what life bings, God's love is sufficient for us all. He is our eternal Valentine! Great job!
05/30/05
A very well written piece, full of emotion and truth, I think it is interesting that Christ's love was discovered though maturity, a truth so many shrug off - thank you for an excellent offering.