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I like the way you were able to meld both the countdown to the new year and Danny's confession to a new life. The time lasted for just a moment but you described it very well.
05/17/05
I totally agree with Leticia. I could really feel the joyful release and the happy tension as the countdown took place. Very good contrast between Danny's and Sarah's final moments of the old year and first moments of the new.
05/17/05
Yes, very cleverly crafted.
05/20/05
I agree with the above comments. The countdown ended Danny's feeling of despair and reached its climax in a feeling joy.
This was a very good article. I loved the way that Danny's salvation ended the old year and began the new year. A wonderful, new beginning.
05/23/05
Robert, congratulations on your 3rd place win in the Level 2 challenge. You actually rated very well over all, and weren't that far off being in the Editors' Choice. So with that in mind, I think it would be a good time to move up to Level 3. You're more than ready for it. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)