The Official Writing Challenge
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Your title got me, and I enjoyed your submission. Keep it up!
11/09/07
Great title and terrific story! you may want to add abit more dialogue in the middle to break up the telling part and show more - otherwise - loved the voice throughout:)
11/11/07
How funny and sad at the same time! The whole mixer thing sounds like something that would happen to me. But, oh, how sweet the outcome! Good job!
11/12/07
Yes, your title fooled me, too. Very nice. I'm surprised I haven't had this happen to me. I am kitchen challenged to the max. This is a good example of friendship evangelism. You could have spiced it up a little by adding some dialogue maybe. Very nice piece!
Laury
11/15/07
Very well written. Holds the attention right the way through.