The Official Writing Challenge
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Your title got me, and I enjoyed your submission. Keep it up!
Great title and terrific story! you may want to add abit more dialogue in the middle to break up the telling part and show more - otherwise - loved the voice throughout:)
How funny and sad at the same time! The whole mixer thing sounds like something that would happen to me. But, oh, how sweet the outcome! Good job!
Yes, your title fooled me, too. Very nice. I'm surprised I haven't had this happen to me. I am kitchen challenged to the max. This is a good example of friendship evangelism. You could have spiced it up a little by adding some dialogue maybe. Very nice piece!
Very well written. Holds the attention right the way through.