The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/07
I really enjoyed the simplicity and freshness of your parable. Gives a fresh way of looking at spreading the gospel.
11/09/07
Very nice writing - good balance of dialogue and good ending. The only place I struggled with was your first sentence. I might want to rework it for clarity some more. Thanks!
11/14/07
This story is extremely well written. I don't know how I missed it before! I love the way you put a picture in my mind of evangelism without even saying the word. I also think your added insight of how the Lord does not need our help but lets us help anyway is excellent.
11/15/07
Congratulations! Lovely picture of the father and son together.