The Official Writing Challenge
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Particularly strong regarding the older brother and the father; I could easily picture thsi so your job was well done.
11/11/07
This was a great little piece! Very well done. I love your analogies -- all of them:)
Laury
11/14/07
This is a great word picture! Good job putting it into a story.
11/15/07
This makes quite an impact. Well done!