The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/07
This is very interesting and I love the title. If only you had put some paragraphs in and spaced between them. It would make it much easier and much more enjoyable to read. It's probably what's kept others away. If I'm reading this right -- it's a description of heaven and hell, right? Very good job. You gave me some things to think about!
Laury