The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
Oh my goodness, what a tear-jerker! I won't soon forget this touching story.
11/02/07
Should have warned me I needed a kleenex! This was a very nice, sad, happy piece. Good job!
Laury
11/03/07
Very moving.
11/05/07
This is a really good story line that needs to be developed more. Work more on the dialog and on painting the pictures with your words. (I wanted to hear the rest of the jokes). Definitely a heart catcher!! You are off to a great start with this one. Keep working on it!!
11/06/07
Really touching. Good job,(I would say more but have to find a kleenex):)
11/06/07
Beautiful, beautiful story.
11/07/07
What a special little boy. How sad to lose him so soon, he touched many, thanks for sharing a great story.
11/08/07
Beautiful story, you are gifted.