The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/05
Well done. It is always difficult to write from personal experience and you did it very well.
05/18/05
Well written. My only suggestion is to write the last paragraph as your own discovery, rather than as a challenge. I'd find it more inviting, touching.
05/20/05
You did evolve from your hopelessness to one who has found the light that Christ gives. This was a fine piece of writing that captured the sense of despair that so many feel and try to cover up by partying.
05/20/05
A joy to read. I love to hear about how people find Jesus. You described your before and after beautifully. Praise God!
I can relate to a lot in your article. We have much in common. God sets up sovereigns in families. If your family has not yet followed your lead, you may very well be the one He has chosen to pray or maybe even lead them all into a personal relationship with Him. We serve a wonderful God.