The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this very much and feel that Lucas has more stories for us.
Great job! I kept wondering as I read, "Now what could this possibly have to do with Sunday school?" Sneaky way to keep me hooked, and then delight me with the ending!
11/02/07
This was very creative and yes -- sneaky! Good job!
Laury
11/06/07
Great job! My favorite part was the second half - your writing really flowed there. I loved the surprise ending too! Only suggestion I might make is to watch the adverbs. Otherwise - I'd like to say - some really good writing here - creative!