The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/07
I guess you could say my lesson was more than the words or lesson itself, it was the Spirit of Truth reaching from the depths of one saint to another.

Ah, yes, that's the whole point! Great insight in such a short number of words.
I think there is much more here, maybe for another topic?

Thanks.
11/02/07
Yes, we do have a God of irony and a sense of humor -- for sure! Good job!
Laury
11/03/07
Ah yes, irony. That surely is the way God can work. As an experience, this tasted very familiar. As a piece of writing, I wanted more. Maybe it needs more show and less tell.
11/06/07
I still would like to know what happen that day that made a difference, a touch a word, handshake? Need more meat to make this a meal. Keep writing.