The Official Writing Challenge
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Sad in the beginning, heart-warming in the end. Good story!
Thank you for sharing your memories with all of us. How sad, though. Did your mom end up having twins? Just wondering... Good job!
Nice balance of bitter and sweet. Well done.
I like the message of this "teach one, reach one" it was a little rough in places but with a little reworking I think this can be quite good.
My only suggestion would be starting the story in the middle, perhaps in the Orphanage dormitory and paint a picture of what it was like, then go back to explaining how you came to be there. This grabs the attention at the outset and you can fill in the detail afterwards.