The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
I love the voice of this - Your characterization is irresistable. Caught some grammar and such issues, but those are minor. This is a great story - I enjoyed it very much.
10/25/07
Really enjoyed your voice, especially in the first half of this. Very realistic and wry.

There were a few capitalization issues, notably in the title and in the word "Bible" which is always capitalized.

Thank you for sharing this testimony.
Grat read, I'd like to read the wife's perspective of this story some time.
10/27/07
Great voice in this piece. Thanks for sharing it. A few grammar errors, though. Keep writing.
10/29/07
I loved your honesty in this piece, great reading.
10/30/07
I agree with most of the previous reviewers good story, nice telling, keep writing.