The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
Love the beginning and the end of this - great job of describing the scene especially. Your testimony was also moving - but I felt like it was telling rather than showing. Maybe some more specific examples would give this piece a bit more energy. Good stuff!
10/25/07
Thank you for sharing your spiritual journey with us!

I was confused by the "mysterious clicking." What was it?
I liked the question of "How did we all get here?". I love to hear others testimony. Thanks for sharing.
10/30/07
Beautiful testimony. Amazing when He actually leads us beside still waters... thanks for sharing this piece of your heart.
10/30/07
The beginning of this piece is filled with beautiful descriptions. However, the middle seemed to distract from the narrative you began. Then, you wrapped it up nicely at the end.
11/02/07
Congratulations, Darlene. Your entry placed 12th in Level 2. The Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 Overall Lists are posted each week in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings Forum of the Faithwriters Message Boards.