The Official Writing Challenge
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Are you sure you didn't mean to enter this in Masters? This is just amazing in its description, language, EVERYTHING. I gasped several times. I hope this does well - and even if it doesn't, KEEP WRITING THIS WAY.
Your descriptions are incredible. I felt at peace while reading this at my lunch break. Can't wait to see the results!!
This is beautiful. Incredible writing and vivid, almost poetic, descriptions.

The verses being in all caps seemed distracting to me the first time I read it through. Maybe consider using italics. Just a small suggestion.
Absolutely wonderful article. Well done.
Finally I now know the scripture that some use to say baptism washes away sin. We know it is not in the water but in the calling (belief in) on his name that makes the difference. Thank you for showing in your entry it was the MC's faith and belief that changed him.
This moved me. What a beautifully written testimony.
Congratulations, JoAnne. Your entry placed sixth in Level 2. The Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 Overall Lists are posted each week in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings Forum of the Faithwriters Message Boards.