The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/07
Interesting explanation of the reason for baptism! I caught some misspellings here and there, and this might be an easier read if you divide it into smaller paragraphs. Much to think about here. Keep writing!
10/25/07
It's obvious that you've studied extensively on this subject!

There's some irregular capitalization and some distracting parenthetical phrases here that somewhat detract from the flow of this piece. You'll increase your readability with a few key edits.

Thanks for sharing this with us!
10/28/07
Not sure if your subject was about the keys of the kingdom or about baptism. I felt it was heartfelt though. Remember to spellcheck or allow someone else to read to make sure what you are trying to convey is on point. And likewise God bless you too.