The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/07
What a terrific story! How many times have I wanted to be alone and forced myself into a situation I didn't want to be in...then ended up filled and refreshed. THIS is wonderful!
Amen!
10/20/07
Wow! This sounds like a fun day. I've had times like that, too, where I just want to stay home but so glad I didn't. Good job.
Laury
10/21/07
What a wonderful day you described so well! I like the group of characters and the MC. I can understand the Mom's desire to get her kids back to "normal" for a while, too. Very good!
10/21/07
Oh, how I could identify with your MC, not just at the beginning, but all the way through. Nice job!