The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/07
This took my pulse up several notches. Wow! What an adventure!
10/20/07
Wow! Too bad people are passing this entry by. Maybe the title is a little weak. This was very exciting. Very good...
Laury
10/21/07
Very good writing and quite exciting to read. You made many good points in your story and I loved every minute.
10/21/07
Wow! This was one of the best short, short stories I've read.
I was hooked from beginning to the end.
Thanks for sharing this.
Wow. I loved every bit of this and was strangely at peace when Tom gave his life to God. THANK YOU.
10/23/07
I agree with the other comments, this is a great read. Well done