The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/07
What an entertaining story! I could picture being there....
10/18/07
This was very different -- almost written from the animals' POV. Very good...
Laury
10/21/07
Serene, calm, and beautiful setting. I could see the images as you wrote about them and hear the laughter of the people. A charming vignette.
10/23/07
Wonderful imagery, very descriptive writing, loved every bit of it