The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/07
I love your points 1, 2 & 3. These are the essentials, aren't they? I would've liked to see them tied together in a bow at the end, but of course, you do just have 750 words. :) Also, I always like to see scriptures referenced, so that if I want to go back and look at them myself, I don't have to do a key word search to do so. You have summed up Christian fellowship nicely. I love the story you chose to draw your information out of....
10/18/07
True Christian fellowship should be the kind of friendship that makes the rest of the world look at us and envy what we have with each other.

That is so very true -- like that sentence. Nice little devotional.
Laury
10/20/07
You have developed an interesting devotional that brings out the points you'd like to make about fellowship. I like the Biblical friendship you chose to highlight.
One day I hope to be brave enough to go to scripture and base my entry on a part of it. I enjoyed iwth very much, you've given me many things to think about.