The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
"Recognizing these truths, I realized my inability to worship at my own Church had more to do with the cluttering of my soul with all the ‘makings’ of a Church, focusing inward rather than upward."

This has been my own experience so many times. I could hear your heart in this piece, and it cries out for change in all of us. Wonderfully expressed.
I wanted more about the church at the temple...were they just starting or were a lot of people really away? I could also see somtehing down the road connecting the Jewish inhabitants with their sometime tenants. Enjoyed it very much.
10/13/07
Very nice - your voice is just right for this. Enjoyed the read very much.
10/16/07
Very nice - good details, lovely ending. I enjoyed this! :) Cat