The Official Writing Challenge
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There are so many things about this article that I like:
- the synchronized umbrellas
- the imagery of the school of fish
- the rivers that trickled down Michael's dark hair
- the healing the prodigal son brought to his mother

Wonderfully written.
05/17/05
Beautiful word pictures throughout. Well done on a beautiful piece.
05/17/05
Soooooo Good! This piece has got my vote! Pat
05/18/05
Interesting imagery.
This piece has got my vote too. It is so poetic with its eloquent imagery.
Very good imagery. The prodigal son was a nice touch. This is a really good story.
05/23/05
hey madonna...well done...an excellent piece...i loved it. ...keep up the good work. you are really talents..blessings kazza.
05/25/05
Excellent writing! You certainly have a gift.