The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
A true worship experience will take us to another place, as you so powerfully described. "I'll fly away, Oh Glory, I'll fly away..." dying to ourselves is what takes us there. Beautiful.
10/11/07
Wonderful writing!! I loved your descriptions but mostly how you added the dialogue and brought us back - good ending!!
I went with you and also came back, but rally didn't want to, thanks for the images.
10/13/07
Very vivid descriptions. Enjoyed this.