The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
You made me cry....what a convicting story!
Oh, isn't he just wonderful! You did a great job transferring the nudging of Jesus to paper. Thanks!
10/13/07
Very moving and convicting - you had me on the edge of my seat from the beginning to the end. The ONLY change I would make is to maybe have her call the woman instead of only praying. Just my opinion, though. This is QUITE powerful!
10/14/07
Wow! This is a very moving story. You've done a great job of writing it and perfectly relating it to the missing puzzle piece. Very well done!
10/15/07
Very good, and a good title also. Some areas the transition was kind of rough one example (the bathroom cubicle to talking about the son being killed in an accident. But a really solid piece.